Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Monday, April 6, 2020
A Day in The Life of an Animal
my owner is fiona she treats me well.
fiona got me on Monday in the afternoon i was a baby when she got me.
when i turned one fiona started teaching me to jump in to a hoop.
for the day fiona lets me outside so I go and find my friends.
me and my friends go to the woods and play in the mud .
then we eat lunch we eat carrots then i go home and i go to sleep.
my hut is two storied i have a ramp to get up to the second floor where my bed is. it is made out of pillows.
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Hi Harper, lovely writing about the gorgeous fluffy rabbit. What is its name?
ReplyDeleteMrs Roach
If I was a rabbit my name would be Fluffs.
DeleteHarper your rabbit is super cute! Do you have any other pets?
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.
I have a cat called Harry.
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